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Optanic 2005-02-07 ch 1,	Yes, I have trouble picturing Cindella having a tiff with her father. I kept picturing the father-in-law in the movie, Cinderella, whom she adores and visa-versa.I suppose with no wicked step-mother she needed some motivation to leave home. Princes not being as earth-shaking as they were once upon a time... so sad though.
Stories-have-souls 2005-01-12 ch 1,	Wow, a pretty good story. You have this really good writing style, and you keep the reader interested. I also LOVED the ending (funny and sweet). You also seem to know your facts on that era, what with the dowry and all.
Sallie Beaver 2005-01-09 ch 1,	Amy Amy Amy!! That's fantastic...I remember you telling me about your Cinderella story for English...I like it heaps, and the images throughout it are lovely. It's certainly magical and I love the humor as well. And, of course, the happy ending. ^_^ I must say, Cindella is a very stately lady and I liked her character, only I didn't get a very good idea of it 'cause the story was a bit short. The prince's personality is quite vague as well, but he's quite likeable all the same. I wished to know more though...Particularly about their conversations and Cindella's father, because there's a lot more that could be said so the reader has more empathy for the princess. More descriptions and emotions...But otherwise, it's simply lovely...I like the modern bits in some of the speech, and the ending was certainly satisfying. “Father? What about my engagement?” “That was, of course, terminated as soon as I received news of this.” Hahahaha, that's terrific!! More, more! -Sallie
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-01-07 ch 1,	Cute little story you have here...I love the characters and you did a great job with First POV. I would have perhaps liked to see a little more to it...but you had wonderful desciptions of the characters. Good write and the end was a great touch of humore. Nice write.

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