WOW! best poem yet! good job!

hm, ezzactly how i feel about MY gf, nice work! not all poems have to be long, but this one was pretty good! keep it up.

Peace and Chicken Grease

Short sweet and to the point.Great poem.

sometimes the shorter ones are the best poems, and right now, you seemed to haved proved that, to the point and emotional, good job and geep on writing