That was so good... And really sad.I love how you used description. I hope you to are still together because not many people can make long distance relationships work but I hope you are one of those people who can :). GREAT POEM!

PyroChica*

That was so sad. I miss you so much. That was probably the best week of my life though, all thanks to you. You already know what i think of this one, writer's block, my ass-Keith Andrew

This is so sad, I hope that you get to see this person again soon, they are really lucky to have you, you must feel so strongly about this person. Beautifully written.

Keep it up.

aww... this absoultely beautiful alex.. and so sad, it almost made me cry. i know how you felt when he left.. you describe everything so well it's almost like being there in person, lol.. great work, i love it..

love you bestfriend! love Zai

LOVE IT! I totally get the feeling...

love the last line.

Han.

great poem, i relate strongly to this, and i love the title, keep it up _

amazing poem, i'm sure a lot of people agree with you. i got drawn in by the title, and it was really something else!