Another one where no real techie-comments spring to mind. Good reflection...good metaphors. Droolable poem ^_^

Love it, Ash-chan. ^^ Keep up the good work, k? I like reading your poems, after all. ;)

That was really good! Very good imagery and description! Keep writing! :-)

Sque! I like this one a lto! Definetly good job bringing out the emotions neccessary for this! -dances happily- It's so good!

Ash-chan is a great poetress!

Btw, why am I to blame again? O,O

Great Job dear, luv ya!

Tatianna

thank Alyssa! You're pretty good. I really like the use of the word shards... fits really well when you continue to make it a metaphor for dreams.