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| bright horizon splash 2006-02-20 ch 1,  | abusehow beautiful yet simple. now it makes my spring fever even worse! great job. |
| Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abuseYOU LIKE MANHEIM STEAMROLLER! You rock. So does this poem. I love the simplicity of it. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-20 ch 1, | abuseLovely imagery |
| cup-of-kitsch 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseLovely. |
| Ivriniel 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHm, nice. I like the "gentle breeze", I can almost feel it. |
| aquamoon222 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseLike almost all of your work this has a hidden meaning and is so gentle and sweet to read. Very nice. If you don't mind I was wondering if you'd reviwe my newest poem called sea of tears. That is, if you want to.:) Thanks alot! Amanda* |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseNice image, peaceful x weasel within x |
| dancingintherain 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abusevery cute... |
| florida 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseits short... yet... it tells u everything u need to know. It makes me imagian looking up to see their leaves and watching them sway in the wind. *shrugs* I like it, keep writing. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-01-19 ch 1, | abusesimple yet lovely! |
| Starfire Rhapsody 2005-01-12 ch 1, | abuseshort but so sweet and I really like it a lot :) same as all your stuff! Hehe I meant to r&r with your other stuff before but i got caught up with college hehe hope you're doing well in college and all :) |
| simpleplan13 2005-01-11 ch 1, | abusemy mom would love this. ncie imagery |
| r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abusenot a big fan of haikus *i cant write em :P* but you just may change my mindkeep writing :) |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseCentipede of leaves, Palm tree in warm tropic breeze,— Her hair hovers near. —m— |
| scudcrow 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseInviting personification! Has a good feel to it :) |