how beautiful yet simple. now it makes my spring fever even worse! great job.

YOU LIKE MANHEIM STEAMROLLER!

You rock.

So does this poem. I love the simplicity of it.

Lovely imagery

Lovely.

Hm, nice. I like the "gentle breeze", I can almost feel it.

Like almost all of your work this has a hidden meaning and is so gentle and sweet to read. Very nice.

If you don't mind I was wondering if you'd reviwe my newest poem called sea of tears. That is, if you want to.:) Thanks alot!

Amanda*

Nice image, peaceful x weasel within x

very cute...

its short... yet... it tells u everything u need to know. It makes me imagian looking up to see their leaves and watching them sway in the wind. *shrugs* I like it, keep writing.

simple yet lovely!

short but so sweet and I really like it a lot :) same as all your stuff! Hehe I meant to r&r with your other stuff before but i got caught up with college hehe hope you're doing well in college and all :)

my mom would love this. ncie imagery

not a big fan of haikus *i cant write em :P* but you just may change my mindkeep writing :)

Centipede of leaves,

Palm tree in warm tropic breeze,—

Her hair hovers near. —m—

Inviting personification! Has a good feel to it :)