Wow very cool poem. Especially like the ending.

Rocky :)

Wow, I finally get on the computer! Excellent stuff, how you change your life around, when you don't like something!

this is just how i feel about my life. well done. this was really great.

I really like this one! It flows nicely, and it actually has end rhyme. Definitely not as choppy as some of your other poems, and me gusta mucho the figurative language! Je t'aime, y te amo!