No doubt a lovely poem, but there was something that I just couldn't put my finger on that didn't seem right. Hmm, oh well. Very nice, I definitely felt involved.

i liked the last half, but it took a bit to really get the rythme. the first two stanza didn't really seem to fit in. i like it alot...loved the ending!

i definitely liked this poem. very nice! i tried to write one on falling, but i changed it to "Scratching Post" and i'm still developing most of the rythym.

anyways, i really quite liked this one!^^

-Rachel.

*Every legend leaves a mark*

wow good love it!!

O_o ...please don't be like your old man, son.