somehow, this mirrors the sentiments i expressed in "faint of heart." i ached when i read it, luv. literally.

Interesting poem you have here. I like some of the images, like a "heart of pumice" and "obstinate couches crouch." I'm not sure how all the images relate to each other, but it's an intriguing poem nonetheless. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

A darkly beautiful and fascinating poem. I've enjoyed reading. You should start writing poetry again, you have a talent. Don't let it go to waste.

Setne (aka Anaare)

I can relate with this well. Your articulation is gorgeous. Word choice is very satiable. All the words seem to have their own grace, but the truth in your poem is quite obscure. Though it's easy to tell where you're going, it's hard to see where you end in your thought process - though I know poetry is not entirely about getting people to understand, as much as it is to get them to feel you and you do a great job of that.

Wow. Sounds a little bit confusing, and a little depressing. Some of it is hard to follow. Have you tired stanzas? Just trying to help,

The Singing Angel.

Sounds convincing enough to detest urban cacaphony and my beloved iPod. These poems are fabulous! I love how you put much feeling in it. It shines with all poetic sense! :) Keep writing.

Woah... cruel much... So much emotion... Wah. i'm jealous ofyour words :P

Wow... You don't put much grotesque fancy in your words, but they shine, especially the truth :) I love this one

"Crying, for what, she cannot/remember" carries such a heavy veil of foreboding. It's gorgeously macabre. bella

Well developed subject-simple but good. I like the way the rythm is stuttered, if you know what I mean. I don't know if you meant to do that, but it really emphasizes the lines. Good job.

Very deep and full of emotion.

It became something truly poetic, I think.

Touching in the most heartbreaking way writing can be.

* Noelle

i need more tiime to work this out! again, i loved the title..now i just need to figure out where it applies in the piece...keep writing! D

i think the title of this collection is really nice...funny and quirky. captured my attentiion! keep writing D

How soothing and evocative.