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| Lindsey B. 2005-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey Sam...good poem! I don't see anything wrong with it at all. You really capture the feeling of the reader and I'm very impressed! You should make a living outta this! Don't change anything about your poems. :) |
| myno 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abusevery interesting- i really like the beginning, and the way it flows from talking about the ocean to talking about the eyes of the person you love. |
| tropical-forest 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseDude this is hot damn! Teehee... I like it very much. |
| M. R. Smale 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseSo powerful, I can definitely relate with my special friend, not being able to tell her because of her dad. Keep up the great work! |