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Reviews For: I Wish I Could Tell You

Lindsey B.
2005-02-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey Sam...good poem! I don't see anything wrong with it at all. You really capture the feeling of the reader and I'm very impressed! You should make a living outta this! Don't change anything about your poems. :)
myno
2005-01-09
ch 1,
abusevery interesting- i really like the beginning, and the way it flows from talking about the ocean to talking about the eyes of the person you love.
tropical-forest
2005-01-08
ch 1,
abuseDude this is hot damn! Teehee... I like it very much.
M. R. Smale
2005-01-08
ch 1,
abuseSo powerful, I can definitely relate with my special friend, not being able to tell her because of her dad. Keep up the great work!
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