WOW. Who would have thought something seemingly so simple could be so profound and so well voiced? The rhymes are perfect, and they are neither cheesy nor overused. The ideas seem like they could be so mundane (life, death, dream, breathing, etc.), but when woven together by you, it's so much more. I love the last line, "Love is all that we demand..." - so beautiful! Keep it up!!

-ShadowNemesis

Ouh, I love this poem, it's very nice in its simplicity. Very touching

This was a very good poem. Neat too.

this poem is cool...we have the same birthday! i am 15 of the 24th of janurary. YAY! i wish you a very happy early birthday! good poems btw

Short but meaningful...it was good!keep up da good work!Kari~

O.O ::adds to fav. stories list:: I love the simpleness of this. It just has this feel to it I can't understand. ;o; Well done !!

~ Noelle ~