I like it. I wouldn't really consider it angst, so much as drama. I mean, when I hear the word "angst" I think of Linkin Park. Anyways this was very creative and well written.

Ah, this is a nice piece. I love how you generalized a country (America) as a person (mr). How his 'American dream' turns out to be nothing but a sham. I think there are many great points and truths to which you write, although some of your views could be greatly debated. Perhaps work on the ending a bit. Good write.

"Now, Mr America lives in a box with his daugther.Whos giving birth to two ** children from unsafe sex and incest!Mr. America got fed up with his life and blew his brains out.His daugther a crackwhore with 10 children now.Who all live ** foster home lives.And his wife is having sex with the hunk she met.And his world was never the same..."

I do not like the end of this song, but the begginning has a very good point, with all said and done, i give it and 8/10, keep it up!

I wish I were better at reviews and whatnot so that I could think of more to say than, "I like it." But sadly, I cannot.