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--and it's believable. I love it. I think you really enjoy writing this story, and it shows. There are grammatical errors [mostly run-on sentences], but the plot is excellent.

Keep up the good work!

lmao, this is great:

"Yeah, how is she?

Good. Good."

You've got a really good background going--everyone has their own traditions, languanges, and names that are rediculously original

AWSOME! More , more!

How do you come up with all the names for the languages and places? I have enough trouble picking a name for my main characters. lol

Anyways another great chapter and I look forward to hearing more.

This story is getting good. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to hear more.

o! This is very good. I hope you are going to update soon.