gah...very beautiful...just, it brings back old habbits. but thats good, it means your getting to me, and your making me rember/feel again. that makes your poetry strong.i like the idea of "rest in pain"

your poetry is somewhat like mine in the sense of morbidness, as dark imagery is one of my favorites. it's well written and has a strong voice and tone to it. well done

Beautiful poem...you painted a picture with words. Amazing.

Dark, morbid, violent, depressing, full of excellent imagery and metaphor. I'm impressed, if I'd room left in my favouritres list you'd be going straight there-Keith Andrew

wow... that was an amazing poem! You have a lot of talent. Keep writing!

-jexsuisxrien

I absolutely LOVE this poem. You really captured the whole "desparity/pain" feeling. I'm in a dark mood right now, and this poem is just what I needed!

Kiyomi