Wow, this is beautiful! I can really relate to it. And your rhyming is so good. Great job! :)

I really like how it started out with a sad tone, but ended up on a hopeful note. The transition was such that you barely even noticed what had happened until you were done reading. Awesome, awesome work!

~Daphne~

ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! This, by far, is probably one of your greatest poems, seriously! i'm not just saying this cuz im ur friend and all, lol, it really was exellent. really deep emotions that i liked. the rhymes also flowed well too and the sadness contrasted really well with the sorrow and despair. i too, feel like this sometimes. just wanting to cleanse myself from "tears of the sky"...if only life were that simple :)

~BeautifulEcho~P.S.~ this is definitely going under my faves!

This was a beautiful poem. I loved the ending. Great job.

Lesse. First of all...*bows* Thankees for der reviews. They're chocolate. *is a teense dizzy*

This poem is very insightful. I like that about your poems, or at least the ones I've read. They all seem to have a point you can really think about until it really clicks in your head and you go 'I GET IT!' in a really loud voice.

The last line is a little off beat, but that is just a little nitpicking from me, trying to justify the fact that you're a better poet. So take no mind.

^^ Onwards then!

very refreshing in a way. how nice

this is nice, but its a bit flowery. it doesnt really relate either. but overall you had nice descriptions and good writing tecniques.

Excellent. Beautiful rhythme skyme.