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| pink honey 2005-07-12 ch 1,  | abusegood job... i really liked the last line... |
| PyroChica 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis Haiku was very well written. It is really short but you definately get an image across really fast! |
| alligater20 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abusewow! i have never paid haiku much attention before, but this poem has certainly changed that! good work! :) |
| Rocky G 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseVery nice Haiku! Love the descriptions really paints a picture of a storm. |
| stormy 2005-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this. Nice, right after a tsunami! Great job |