I liked this poem, and there is nothing in the world like a boy who write poetry. But... a few things. I, personally, find the use of words such as "a lot","stuff", and "messing" don't really fit in a poem like this. It seems very heartfelt, and the use of simple, elementary words like those demean the emotional value of the poem. I really liked your closing line; "Have a little drink, and he will kiss you." Very nice.

I relaly liek the ending

hum...i like it. u siad you dont remeber writing this, dont you hate it when that happens? lol good job tho!

much love