i know what you mean when you say "am I my shadow? or is my shadow me?". great solid work tho

Hey. Thanks for your review.

I liked the rhyme scheme. Thought it sounded great. Great poem.

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I like this one even more than your writer's block poem. It is a very interesting way to portray darkness. I myself have been juggling the idea of how you need dark to balance light. But you display the shadow as, maybe not a good thing, but not completely evil. I like it, and you maintain rhyming well, witch helps the flow. And you’re a guy, right (if I’m wrong, please just ignore me, though I kind or assume you are of the male species since your bio says your name is Randy)? That is something cool, too. I find so few guys who write poetry, especially on this sight. There are way too many angsty girls (and I’m a girl, why am I saying this?) around here.

Anyway, back on topic, I liked the poem, it was very interesting.

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i remember you telling me about this one. i like it.

Wow, this really screamed out to me...but that's cuz it's so good _ *PAMMY*