Aww... That was heartbreaking. Poor Gabe... Awesome read by the way.

Did she mean it in the way Gabe wanted her to when she said 'I love you'?

That was just well done. Gabe's a really sweet character and I love how you were able to balance out conveying his ambivalence about the wedding. His ideal girl is getting married to someone else; however, it's also his two best friends. It was really a heart breaker, but the ending seemed really optimistic to me. Even though Gabe was heart broken, he was still happy in some respects about the marriage and he tried his best to preserve his friends' special day. I think that was just... It takes a lot of strength for a person to be able to do that, but he isn't perfect and you really showed that in describing his feud with the best maid. I really would have loved to have seen a bit of that in the story. But I guess that's the hallmark of a great story, it always leaves you wanting more.

I'm bawling. That was so powerful and sweet and SAD!

Eek. I was so confused when he was talking about himself at the 3rd person, but having thoughts that should be with "i'. I dunno. It was a good fic though, except those parts. And it could've been more dramatic... longer.. like you could've inserted more memories. It's still good.

You made me cry. Seriously, I'm sitting here crying. I'm sure my 5yr old doesn't understand... Very well written.

wow
this almost had me in tears
and i think i know what its like.

very, very, VERY well done.

This made me cry. I hate unrequited love. I can relate so much.

It was beautiful. Thank you.

jesus, the drama the stress. he is so lonely, it must hurt like hell. beatifully done!

Aww. I loved this one shot. It was so bittersweet! It reminded me a little of Love Actually (one of my favorite movies!). It was absolutely brilliant!

You know, I really hope that doesnt happen to me...
[well...except...I'm a girl..]

but anyways...great work...
wonderfuller than all trees

pretty pretty pretty snow...

Wonderful story! It really is great! You've portrayed the emotions fantastically, and the whole 'falling in love with best-friend's girlfriend (or wife)'- it's an excellent idea.
Really well written- keep up the great work!

Fantazolic

aww): its really sad. and really nice. i do wish you would add to this story though(:

Aw.

This made me cry.

At the end, I thought he was going to kill himself. (Which would make it a very dramatic tragedy, but eh.) I was thinking that either the groom was going to cheat on her with Tori, or that Gabe was going to kill himself.

Sigh. I'm a drama **.

Awesome story, wish it wasn't the end!! Any chance you might add more to it the future...if not it was still wonderful!