 ghurl00 2009-11-14 . chapter 1Aww... That was heartbreaking. Poor Gabe... Awesome read by the way. |
 Unwritten.prose 2009-10-28 . chapter 1Did she mean it in the way Gabe wanted her to when she said 'I love you'? |
 LbBabey 2008-12-05 . chapter 1That was just well done. Gabe's a really sweet character and I love how you were able to balance out conveying his ambivalence about the wedding. His ideal girl is getting married to someone else; however, it's also his two best friends. It was really a heart breaker, but the ending seemed really optimistic to me. Even though Gabe was heart broken, he was still happy in some respects about the marriage and he tried his best to preserve his friends' special day. I think that was just... It takes a lot of strength for a person to be able to do that, but he isn't perfect and you really showed that in describing his feud with the best maid. I really would have loved to have seen a bit of that in the story. But I guess that's the hallmark of a great story, it always leaves you wanting more. |
 lily 2008-08-31 . chapter 1 I'm bawling. That was so powerful and sweet and SAD! |
 Genato 2008-05-21 . chapter 1Eek. I was so confused when he was talking about himself at the 3rd person, but having thoughts that should be with "i'. I dunno. It was a good fic though, except those parts. And it could've been more dramatic... longer.. like you could've inserted more memories. It's still good. |
 StoryPictures 2008-03-22 . chapter 1You made me cry. Seriously, I'm sitting here crying. I'm sure my 5yr old doesn't understand... Very well written. |
 nebode 2008-02-18 . chapter 1 wow
this almost had me in tears
and i think i know what its like.
very, very, VERY well done. |
 Faith Lee 2007-12-22 . chapter 1This made me cry. I hate unrequited love. I can relate so much.
It was beautiful. Thank you. |
 ess3sandra 2007-04-18 . chapter 1jesus, the drama the stress. he is so lonely, it must hurt like hell. beatifully done! |
 xxxNitz 2007-04-05 . chapter 1 Aww. I loved this one shot. It was so bittersweet! It reminded me a little of Love Actually (one of my favorite movies!). It was absolutely brilliant! |
 xxxstarlightxxx 2007-03-20 . chapter 1You know, I really hope that doesnt happen to me...
[well...except...I'm a girl..]
but anyways...great work...
wonderfuller than all trees
pretty pretty pretty snow... |
 Fantazolic 2007-03-14 . chapter 1Wonderful story! It really is great! You've portrayed the emotions fantastically, and the whole 'falling in love with best-friend's girlfriend (or wife)'- it's an excellent idea.
Really well written- keep up the great work!
Fantazolic |
 vocecara 2007-02-17 . chapter 1aww): its really sad. and really nice. i do wish you would add to this story though(: |
 Snowhite 2007-02-04 . chapter 1Aw.
This made me cry.
At the end, I thought he was going to kill himself. (Which would make it a very dramatic tragedy, but eh.) I was thinking that either the groom was going to cheat on her with Tori, or that Gabe was going to kill himself.
Sigh. I'm a drama **. |
 forbiddenlove13417 2007-01-09 . chapter 1Awesome story, wish it wasn't the end!! Any chance you might add more to it the future...if not it was still wonderful! |