That was a really superub story...

Very nice so far. ^_^

Oh! Have you ever seen the movie "We're Back?"

You would like it a lot!

It's old, but really good. (And animated)

It's got the creepy circus going on - and the opposite... (waggles eyebrows)

Unless you've seen it already...

Well, anyway, I like your stories.

I'm sorry about you. But i hope that soemthing good can happen with Cyrina and Fieras? Maybe... The story altogether was very good. I'll be reading the sequel.

Tzotel

oh No What will happen! I really must say that this is really good. did you ever think of publishing it?

Tzotel

That was a pretty ingenious idea with the Cikseika! I liked it.

Tzotel

I kinda feel bad for Dez, cause he feels so bad. But Cyrina is a really innocent, so. Nice job.

Tzotel

HA! I wonder what is going to go on between them two? Hm?

Tzotel

She had to help him...

Tzotel

Okay, can you say "creepy"?! It was good but creepy.

Tzotel

Seth is starting to creep me out. Some more spelling stuff but not much. Really Good!

Tzotel

She is so naive! It is sad and cute! nice job.

Tzotel

This was short but good. It was interesting.

Tzotel

Nice foreshadowing! Some spelling mistakes.

Tzotel

This sets up for a pretty good story!

Tzotel