Sounds like somebody's in love... :D
Wonderfully romantic. Odd, isn't it?

*sigh*

Lovely.

What a sweet poem! Bread can write romantic poetry? Who knew? 2 thumbs up! (by the way, you're now on my must reads on my homepage) -Sakka-Fenikkusu

I like the sound and progression of this. It really elevates the mood of the reader. Excellent phrasework, as this is truly audible. Great write.

Picture in my head: A cute 8 year old or something looking back at his 8 year old crush. that's so cute. love, don't think i've ever been in love. good poem.

I really like this poem. It made me sigh. Very nice.

You have defidently channeled all your emotions into that poem...kudos...I commend you on it. That is defidently a unique way to describe the feelings of love. Excellenty! I've never been able to give so much imagery into it..so great job...well, maybe I've never tried...sounds like you've newly inspired me.

Hey, nice use of alliteration, a lovely poem altogether!voh x