I am very very sorry for not reviewing you for ages but there has been some building going on at my house and my internet access has been limited but now i'm back and i must say you have most definitely improved, not that you were ever bad! I'm not saying that but you've matured more in your writing i would say... this is very good... it would make a brilliant song... i can kind of hear it playing in my head at the moment... well done! Keep it up!

This is great! Emotional, and it'd be a great rock song! Keep up the good ones! Xb

you call this a poem i call it fancy but you are a cupcake on the top of my grandpappys head which he will eat for dessert and you smell like sassafrass

Really like this, strong and powerful. Nice job. QueenVixta

i like this! sorry it took so long to review. its good, now write more!

kool, i like it

yeh, i can see this is a good rock song. well done.

Liked it a lot. You're right, it has a nice rock sound to it.

great short lines bvut sometimes there awesome especially easier to sing when playing but not always the best chocie..but anyway great i feel the message