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| Procrastinating Fairy 2005-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseI like this! I love how you took a strand of hair, and made, well this. You expressed these different sides to the same little strand of hair. I love it. Alot. It goes on my favorites! |
| Just Another Face 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat job!! It's so weird how just a simple thing like hair can become something so huge as to define a person. Vanity is strange. You describe it well. And as, always, Keep writing.(Hah, you keep writing I'll keep rappin') Mucho Love,~Lyndz~ |
| hiding behind amber eyes 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is very different for you. i like it though it kinda caught me off guard. do u have black hair? lol good job keep writing. much love |
| Emmytastic gal 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abusewow. I love this, so true. Its amazing how such a simple thing can be taken into so many different perspectives. thank you for the review... write on... -Em |
| simpleplan13 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abusethat was well written adn definately made me think..t ahnks for your review |
| SirGwain 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI really liked that poem... The imagery you used is really cool. Im just breathless, its just Good, and theres no other words to describe it |