I like this.

please please please write more! please? i liked this story very much, and would love to read either the continuation of this particular one, or the continution of this "arc". great job )

I think the phrase 'icicles for hair' was WAY overused, but I still loved it. Short, but sweet, as 'they' say.

I like very much...do more :p

This is really interesting, and really well written. I liked the way you made the man in black seem like he was older and wiser, but at the same time young...Unless that's not how you meant it, that was what I derived from it.