Reviews for One Last Goodbye - FictionPress.com

violetsky23 2005-06-12 ch 1,	abusei like the off-beat rhyming. it sounds cool. good job.
suishoku-ketsurui 2005-02-12 ch 1,	abusethat was awsome dude! i like how the lines didn't have that many words in each one.
Aredhel Carnesir 2005-02-03 ch 1,	abuseO, I liked this one! I understood it! ;) The rhymes are really good. Thanks for the review! I know it's a bit wordy, I'm just afraid to touch it. :P I usually mess them up even worse if I try to make it better. Oi. =) P.S. I like the 'tears run dry' line. But you said part twice. I don't think it disrupts the flow... I'm too tired right now, sorry. -falls asleep on keyboard-
Sparq 2005-02-03 ch 1,	abuseNICE...I ussualy don't like prose, so you can assure this is a wonderfully written piece of work.
tropical-forest 2005-01-09 ch 1,	abuseDude.