Ya know, I actually have a version of that poem that I wrote (I totally agree, by the way), it's called "Everything is gray" but it's not on here, so I'll shut up now...Anyway, keep writing, Ponyboy. From Constance

awesome poem, give me a call...psychotic_jerk@hotmail.com

greyness abound

I like this poem a lot. ^.^ A somewhat common idea, portrayed in a different way. I also love your username, when I read it, i *knew* it was familiar, lol. I thought "The Outsiders" was a pretty good book, I enjoyed it, and now I'll have to pick it up to read it again sometime! Anyways, excellent work, *write on*

I don't know what to say, what to think, but the word choice, and simple lines - they help with the reading."I let my judgement be / free of bigotry" - those 2 lines, I like. ~L.E.~

oh wow! This is so beautiful! The world needs moer understanding people like you! This poem is awesome and the title is catchy! Excellent Job! This is a true work of art!

articulated nicely. nothing is wholly evil or wholly good, but not everyone can see past their prejudices and realize that the world is really made up of shades of gray.

cheers-- lin