Wow. *stares at the computer screen in astonishment* That was...awesome. The image it created was just utterly unbelievable. Awesome, awesome work!

~Daphne~

u're right *looks really confused* some of us DON'T understand it! lol haha. its ok though, maybe u can explain. i think i understand a lil, but iono. anyways, it still seemed to have a beautiful aura around it which made it really nice. Keep it up, Dreamer :)

~BeautifulEcho~

I get it...Its good. Its like The goodness in the world is the candle, and the evilness is the flame, and before you know it there is nothing left, but the remains of what was good in the world.

By the way thnaks for reviewing my lyrics. I really appreciate it because I'm like one of those people that dont believe what they do is ever really good, and when someone like you :) reviews me it gives me like a confidence boost.Good Luck with whatever you write next!

Your angstiness touches me deeply.

bravo.

Or in english: I was totally blown away by the deepness of this poem. It said so much in so little. Something to abide by.

Beautiful work.

*hands cookie*

Thats good. Wow. I feel so connected. I have to go now, but I want to read at least some of your work. Thanks for reviewing my poem, as you may or may not remember me.

you have it sound like the candle is expeiriencing all that is going on arround it each time it is lit. I like it, brava