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| really 2005-01-29 ch 1,   | ack. pretty! very. your impressive vocabulary is..intimidating hahahah. umm. it's a bit angsty (the last chapter) the slightest hint. it spoils the innocent effect. and HAHA this is crammed with cliches. >< but i think this is stunning, really. you managed to pull it off with style. |
| Ohmm 2005-01-23 ch 5, | Ken? You rock. |
| alf4office 2005-01-09 ch 1, | Wow, great imagery! The rhymes worked nicely as well. Great poem! |