ack. pretty! very. your impressive vocabulary is..intimidating hahahah. umm. it's a bit angsty (the last chapter) the slightest hint. it spoils the innocent effect. and HAHA this is crammed with cliches. >< but i think this is stunning, really. you managed to pull it off with style.

Ken? You rock.

Wow, great imagery! The rhymes worked nicely as well. Great poem!