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| carol 2005-01-26 ch 1,  | to ylo: she woildn't let me .. and she wouldn't be lucky eh i dunno but thanx for all the reveiws xoxox,carol |
| YLO 2005-01-20 ch 1, | That's a bummer. She'd be a lucky girl if she got to hear this from you. Very beautiful again. Laters G! ~YLO |
| carol 2005-01-16 ch 1, | to: ylo i would read it to her but i don't think she would let me we are broken up now sadly |
| YLO 2005-01-16 ch 1, | Very awesome poem...did you ever read it to her? If she loved your spanish so much I bet she'd love to hear you read it to her. Peace out G! ~YLO |
| carol 2005-01-10 ch 1, | thank you for the reveiw i love spanish .. i used to speak it just for her because she liked it so much .. although i wasn't very good at it i still did it. and yes it is very pretyy comming from beautiful lips too bad thats not be but thats ok! xoxoxoxox,carol |
| blank 2005-01-09 ch 1, | Spanish is a beautiful language...I've always thought so espcially from beautiful lips |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-01-09 ch 1,  | Beautiful poem. The love and want you express is wonderfully done in your words. The last line though hits like a brick wall...I think everyone goes through this. Very nice poem. |