Reviews for Paul And Jenny Are In Love

Reviews For: Paul And Jenny Are In Love

elliegator 2006-08-14 ch 1,	abusewow.
FuZz ZuRiFf 2005-06-29 ch 1,	abuseYoO bE TrIppIn f00 u PaUl aint In LuV wity dAt Ho JeNNy He Fo ShiZle Ma Nizxzle In LuvV wit Meh YoO SuCh a GodDamn PlAya HaTa U bE fuGlY n U beE EnVyiN mEh CuZ Ma PlAYa hand Is StROng I fInGeErd yerr MoMma n Yo GranDMaMa n all DeM LaDieS in Yerr FaMiLe n Yo LiFe Fo KeeP it StiNkY f00 PeAz DoNt KeeP wRiTin f00 or ElSe ma Crew In Da Fo shizzy gheTTo HouZ wiL 2 yerr hOuZ 2
Weeba 2005-06-25 ch 1,	abuseOh. Oh. What a portrait. Stunning, revealing, glorious in its ordinary intricacy. You've taken life and turned it into song in a way I've never seen on this site. You've turned city streets into what they are and somehow made it beautiful. I could go on and on. A gem on the website. Everyone, simply everyone, should read this poem. Beautiful. Keep writing! ~Weeba~
Alyse Kettle 2005-06-15 ch 1,	abuseI don't normally read poetry on ficpress cos it's often so, well, bad... but very glad I surfed past this one. I really, really enjoyed it, and I can't even quite pinpoint why. Altho wish I could translate the (is it spanish or italian?) you used a couple of times. Nice touch. I especially liked how their lives seemed so important to them, but so meaningless next to history's great 'achievers'. And that might be a simplistic interpretation but I don't care cos I liked the poem.Looking forward to reading more of your work. AK
shinco 2005-05-23 ch 1,	abuseYou really are sad and angry aren't you? What happened to you?
swe8273 2005-02-20 ch 1,	abuseI'm kind of new to the whole poetry thing... I never really got into it when I was younger... Never really understood it. So naturally, when I first read this I was kind of confused, but I get it now. And it's amazing. Bravo!
Made in U.S.A. 2005-02-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is another masterpiece. Truthfull and skillfully written. Just beatiful.
Wing Chant 2005-02-01 ch 1,	abuseHm, this is a interesting piece because it actually tells a story. Quite awsome, indeed. ^_^
Hannah is a Palindrome 2005-01-30 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. Just awesome.:-) GutterFlowerMfM
Captivated Rose 2005-01-20 ch 1,	abuseI actually rather liked this. It was very interesting, though a bit odd. Regardless, it's very nice. Good job.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-01-12 ch 1,	abusehow true it was. I think you nailed all of us in some way or another within those lines.
Wilma Smith 2005-01-10 ch 1,	abuseYou're trying too hard, and trying to be too hip
Cthulhu 2005-01-10 ch 1,	abuseI love it! Experimentation rules.
Ivory-Dragon14 2005-01-09 ch 1,	abusethat's really neat. odd. but neat. i like it.
ALK214 2005-01-09 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful poem. I really appreciated the lengthy verse that only sounds complete once you've read the whole piece... The only thing that I got caught on in this poem was the awkward gravity of the verbage in the poem, but for some reason I feel like you intended that. Great job, keep writing. And please, don't feel a need to review me if you don't want to.

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