Haha undoubtedly the best poem you have ever written bar none. I remember you had me read it when you were writing it and I said the same thing then. Great Great Great Piece Of Work! Genius!

Te-hee! its so cute! crazy kid...

Wow that was pretty good!

Gasp! that was really good! i have no idea how u can put words like that! wow! that was really good! lol :D

wow. i wish i could see it in form.

WOW. all of your poetry is amazing, this one especially. not all people put meaning into their poems, but its in all of yours. and, for me at least, that takes some effort. once again, WOW.

i LOVE this poem! i love the way it places life into one shot... it sounds kinda like my life, actually - fearing things too far away! keep it up!

intresting, very nice imedry.

Wow. I really liked that. I mean, I think the meaning kinda went over my head, but the way you put this into words was beautiful.

Please take a look at some of my poetry. Thank you!

Interesting. I like the imagery in this as well as the metaphor. It flows well even though the formatting is a bit hard the eyes.