Strangely sad, rather hopeless, and exquisitely beautiful. I applaud you.

yeah...it's me again. This story's wonderful and it would be nice if you turned it into a full length story...then again, maybe the reason it's so good is the fact that it's a one-shot...

Aw you sure you just wanted a oneshot with this? Seems so good if you go deeper into it. Oh well. Still wonderful.

Sigh. The [opposite of joy... not pains.. but blah] of unrequited love.

I love your description and detailing of romance! Good good good! Keep up the good work!

I'm intrigued. I really hope you continue with this story. I'm sad there aren't any other reviews. This was good!