oh!
i likie!
please continue!

interesting story, shame about the lack of updates!

i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon

Yay! I found the story again! I can't wait for the next chapter, since I've been waiting for a YEAR!

that story's good too. keep it up!

Lovely fic, as always. I really want more of this. You two really have a way of pulling me in. Now, give me more!

...I think I'm in luv with them. This is going to be so fun. Please update soon.Ican't wait to see Adam's reaction and the Zane's reaction and so on and so on. I love this! I can't wait for more!

hehe- this is a really good story you got here. The character development is shown clearly and imeadiately when each is introduced. Adam seems like a 'rough-around-the-edges' guy who really isn't that bad if you get to know him, and Zaine seems like and uber-flamboyant male who gets all the attention he can because of his lack of self worth. Sounds like a making of a great story^^ update soon^^

Update! Please! Pwease! *puppy eyes* The thing that I love about this is that Adam is so ** heartless! It's almost fake, it's so awful! Could you portray Zane's character some more? I think a worm could understand Adam's nature, but I don't really get Zane.

LOVE IT! update soon!!

oh i'm loving this fic :) Zane sounds so adorable. I'd love to have a friend like that lol

Please update!

.:Kat:.

-I swear, somedays it's just not worth it-

Space between 'some' and 'days.' Someday is a noun, where as 'some' is an adjective describing which 'days' you're talking about... I think. I hope that makes sense. English really is screwy.

Also, I was a bit confused about the name of his friend. Justine? Karen? Karenz? Which is it? Are there more than one? -huh?-

-And as soon as Arthur leaves I'll be sure to tell him that.-

I had to reread this to figure out who it was that Zane was going to tell. It's okay as it is, but you might want to reword it a bit to make things more clear.

Anyhow, I think I like it. Still a bit early to tell, but we'll see. A tad bit more description would be nice, though I'm hesitant in saying that. Mayhaps just break it up a bit? :)

~Sasa

oh, I like Zane so far, he's just so cute!

I just love it :DKeep writing ;)

I don't think it's too fast considering Zane is used to getting who he wants, and Adam's considering marrying a woman even though he's gay. Great development, too.