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| welchs828 2005-03-11 ch 1,   | I love the first 4 lines of the poem. They're just...so descriptive. No sarcasm intended. Knowing me...I mean, I sure can't be sarcastic, but Mal, there's not a snowball's chance in Hell that you're more sarcastic than me. That was sarcasm. You are sarcastic. A lot. So much that I take u seriously. Nice last lines, too...it's 12:19...see u in 1 minute...at lunch. Laterness, -Paige :) |
| The System Mother 2005-01-15 ch 1, | Sunneh. Lol. I like it. Nicely portrayed. |
| Flutist 2005-01-10 ch 1, | The sky is falling! Ah! This is a very unique poem. I am not very good at analyzing poems, but I think this is a poem about night coming in. Am I right? |