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| Ethereal Kisses 2005-03-04 ch 1,   | I thought I'd just check your very first poem to see if your style has changed, and also to find one I haven't reviewed. I like this one actually. The theme I find particularly amazing. The fact that death makes us all the same from "the great kings To the smallest ant" is a very interesting concept. It's extremely good for a first ever poem. ~ Ethereal Kisses ~ |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2005-01-12 ch 1, | Say it loud, say it proud...cuz you can! hehe, keep it up ^_^ *PAMMY* |
| SirGwain 2005-01-11 ch 1, | Its depressing, its downbeat...I liked it.Whenever i want to commit suicide ill just read one of your poems and then ill regret my thoughts.Heheh. Its really good, keep on updating |
| Just Lai 2005-01-10 ch 1, | I really like the last line `A death is what pulls us apart to show what we are like inside.` good job. |
| logical-unreason 2005-01-10 ch 1, | Wow... Deep, simple, but ver, very deep. Facinating, it made me think. |