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| Kinz 2007-09-22 ch 5,   | Li! I've decided that you need to write more of this story, because I was rereading it just now and laughing my freaking arse off. It's hilarious. I don't CARE if you have writer's block or have forgotten all about this story. WRITE MORE! Hokay, I think that's all. |
| cuttingblade 2005-10-25 ch 5, | AWSOME! |
| cuttingblade 2005-10-25 ch 2, | Amazing!Lol wow. ur carzy!!sorry . josh i want a boy friend platinum blonde hair ::shifty eyes:: that is I'm not allowed to date yet soo never mind.LOL |
| Liza Kid Ren 2005-07-02 ch 5, | Ok, now post more!! I demand it!! I need!! Hurry or I shall die of needing more posting... ::Shifty eyes:: No, I am not hyper... |
| suprbookwrm 2005-06-08 ch 5, | i really like this story! please write more soon. |
| GDgirl1993 2005-06-03 ch 5, | I'm lovin this! plez write more soon! |
| DoYouKnowLittleJon 2005-06-02 ch 5, | Whats the deal with no enders game? and you are good at poetry. |
| POTC freak 2005-06-01 ch 5, | Hahaha! I LOVE IT! ^_^ You FINALLY posted! YAY! Hehehe, can't wait to find out what happens next. And I LOVED the handstand... It is SO me! ^_^ I should practice them... Anyways, nice chapter, and POST SOONER NEXT TIME! ^_^ Bye! |
| POTC freak 2005-05-24 ch 4, | Hi! I just felt like reviewing again, so, yeah. YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! It's AWESOME! I just reread it again... I STILL can't believe taht Mrs. MILLER was a PSYCHOLOGIST. And MINE, at that. Oh well, it makes it interesting, to say the least. Hahaha, and you can't forget my picking fingers thing, either! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE! |
| DoYouKnowLittleJon 2005-04-24 ch 4, | Nice job. You've captured me perfectly. But Utah does change... just not very much. |
| pneumonoultramicroscopicsil... 2005-04-06 ch 4, | lol mrs. miller isn't that bad... she's WORSE lol, wish it went a little longer than it did about becki's obsession with pirates, but i think this one was good too |
| DoYouKnowLittleJon 2005-03-19 ch 3, | Of course you have to put a "HOT" british guy in right. |
| POTC freak 2005-03-06 ch 3, | Hi! Your story is awesome! YAY! You added me to it!! Your description was perfect, I loved it. When are you gonna write more? Now I get to bug you too! ^_^ So, update soon. |
| Kinz 2005-03-05 ch 3, | SQUEE! You put BECKI in! And you got her character down very well. XD THAT'S FROM *MY* PIN, THE QUOTE ON HER SHIRT! PIN-QUOTE-STEALER! Hmph, Imma not talk to you anymore. Hmph. ...OK, that lasted about half a second. I had SO much sugar today it's not even funny, that must be why I'm so HYPER! EW PINK IS NASTY ICKY ICKY ICKY ICK! As Becki would say, "Icky! Yucky! Gross!" Or, as Frances would say that Becki would say, anyway. Erm... yeah... yep. I shall go now. HOORAY FOR FREAKISH MISERY! Love ya,Kinz |
| Raphael J 2005-03-05 ch 3, | Your story has the odd situation of life mixed into it. I love all the 'disorders' the people have. I'm sure everyone on earth must have one. And are they really disorders or just a different way of live that people don't understand? That's how I see it. I can't wait to see what happens next, the new girl sounds cool. ;) The only problem I see in your story is going from one scene to the next. I don't know if that's just me or not. I would suggest putting * between the sections. |