I like this poem, the flow of the words helps create the imagery you're putting across. The last two lines bring back the question and give an answer, tying it up nicely.

Love the pen name by the way; the Crow was awesomeness incarnate.

lovely rymeing as always. your stuff is the **!

I love your writing! I feel like I'm there watching everything happen! You ar a really good writer! Thanks again for the review.

This gave me goosebumps. I love it.

I loed that poem, it really is very powerful and the shrasing you used cuts deep. Well done

Wow. That was awesome. I loved it.

Thanks for the review. And nice taste in music. I love AFI! ^_^

Very good, powerful and vivid. You really got the story across here and underlying messages too. Mental anguish argh-Keith Andrew

This is a beautiful poem, it flows wonderfully and has a great meaning; I love it!

Reminds me of abuse...very dark poem if the way I interpreted it is correct (dark and angsty anyways...but more so...) I think the lines, "How do you find the lies?/Asphyxiate me, stare into my eyes" were perfect, as though you need to look into me...stop me from breathing...death...before things come to light. Anyways those were just my thoughts. I really liked this poem though. Very nice writing.