Nice use of short stanzas, empahsizes even further, an infinite loop of ending _ (fill in the blank.)^^ Always a fan of your work!-Cindy Moon *)

Well, don't despair just quite yet, ya old lad! You have yet to explore the woderments and glammers of the future years! Speak not of monotony, for you have not yet savored liberation!Escape, escape is just at the tips of your finger! I see you and envy your plight, your sullen, stubborn refusal to succumb to the passing years, slowly, quickly, revolving, spinning! Is the light burden of 16 years enough to tear you down? With every step, every second, the world changes. Savor while it lasts, bubblegum flavored life. Or grape, if that's your thing.

PS: Since you already know who the hell I am, I see no point in hiding...ke ke ke.

u writing about me? lol i've been thinking this kind of stuff about me thinking about the same thing for years, but i never thought of writing it down...you did an awesome job.

=summerdazed=