I've got to say, this was wonderfully written! Though I only got a little insight into the speaker's emotion aside from the pain, it was really interesting to see what the other was feeling through the speaker's eyes. I've never read that sort of style and you did very well with it. I do have one little comment, though, on spelling...

If you went this path, you’d loose your boyfriend, and you’d loose your friend. You’d loose both of us. - It should be lose, not loose. Loose is like when the knot is loose so you must tighten in.

Wow..this was really beautiful.

hey babe, haha i actualy really like this one. the ending is really good.

I enjoyed this. Really liek the style.

I inspired this? Wow, even with my lack of structure. LOL.Its strange something that uses my same style, not use to it really.Beautifully written. Bittersweet; the way I like my stories. :)