lol luv your story

uh... shouldn't this be rated "T"? no biggie for me, since I'm sixteen, but what if a ten-year-old found this? ... but it was a great story! ^_^ just a little fast for some parts! but, al in all, I liked it! and to think that i used to hate the name Seth! now i like it! lol! ^_^

I'm just reviewing to figure out whether you remember me or not... :D I'm glad you're going to keep writing about Riley, he's a good characher to work with... so yeahh... if you remember me... notify my somehow...

Sophie-sama

First time I review this story. I might review it some more later, and definetly at the end. I like Melanie...she's funny. What kills me is that she got so mad at him for cheating on her for cheating on him. Reminds me when a friend of mine dated her ex just so she could cheat on him. After that he, of course, confessed to cheating on her. She broke up with him, and told him she was cheating on him with three other people while they were dating. Both times.

Good ending!

It's over?! O_O NO! *sobs* It was a good ending though ^_^ hehe well at least There will be a story about Riley :P I was wondering about him

QC: ...I feel unfulfilled. Stop reading over my shoulder.

Riley: ...I get mentioned! -does super happy thumbs up of Joy!-

Melanie: -smacks Riley.- Stop, Spike.

Russia: That was...ahuh. -plays the bugle.-

QC: -puts the entire cast on a funeral pyre.- Well...G'night, one and all. May you sail fairly into the night...

Seth: What?! We don't even get to have sex before we die?

QC: I don't care. Hump while you burn.

Ethan: -cries.-

Riley: But...but...

QC: -yawns, and whistles.-

Billy Joe: -zips past on a speed boat.- Wohoho!

QC: Come here! You have the gasoline!

Billy Joe: I sold it on Ebay!

Terry: Ow...-is still broken.-

Rest of the Cast: ...-leave while QC is distracted.-

QC: -gets the gas from Billy, and dumps it on boat. Sings an ancient Nordic funeral song, while throwing a matching and setting the boat to sail.-

Terry: Ack! Why am I the only one on this boat?!

Ethan and Seth: -are busy.-

Riley: -is sexy.-

Russia and Melanie: -DDR!-

QC: ...Behind the -Music-...I mean...Fanfic! Let's come back in ten years, tell how Seth lost it all in a bad tuna investment, how Ethan became a skanky Turkish HeShe, how Melanie's vagine imploded, and how Russia's pet dog died.

Billy Joe: -shoots QC with a tranquilizer.-

QC: Night night...

GAKI TOKI TOOK MY REVIEW FORMAT! IT MUST DIE! AIEIE!

Riley: But...according to Kem-kem, she made a uh...reference to you.

QC: ...so?

Seth: Ow! I broked my bones! Ethan! -cries.-

Ethan: ...Dumb. **. -growls.-

Seth: I made an ouchie! But I'm a nice guy now!

Russia: -dumps concrete into the money pool.-

Melanie: I've got rhythm, I've got soul...

Rayce: Oh...shiny. -stares off.-

I feel stupid for reviewing this but...WOO HOO RILEY!

Morbid Maxwell

What the hell? What do you mean will Jason ever come out of the closet?! HE'S NOT F-ING GAY ALRIGHT?!?!?!?! Jesus Christ! But I do have to admit you made me fall off my chair laughing. My sis just stared at me funny...it was so weird...and what? A kitten? Metrosexual? Okay, whatever we'll go with that...FOR REN...Jason is so totally straight... (gives evil stare) and there is no "romance" going on between them. I have Jason's "other" for that, cause 'member in the prologue it mentions his "other", Jack Daw...it's so weird cause Thad's like his lover...and Jason wants nothing to do with him. Hmm... I didn't know you were a Taiwanese crack **...that's news ta me. Wow, how much do you work for?

I must say that was a cute ending, although a terrible death would have been cool (being that I'm a morbid person) a down beat true love ending is also really sweet, I have really no critique, mainly beacuse I can't say write longer chapters being that the story is now complete. All in all it was a cute story

Much Love Mars D'mo

...no, that was the worst ending ever...WHY DID IT END?! No, you did a great job, I just wanted to see it continue. If you do have a sequel, I'll be back to read. I just want to let you know you did a wonderful job and I hope you keep writing more stories, you kick **!

Masochist Maxwell

...*bursts out in tears* That's the end?!?! NO! Now I will have one less fic to eagerly anticipate the new chapters of! *starts cursing in blah* *sits down* I'll just wait forever, then. 'Til you get another fun fic that is new! Bye bye!

Aww. That was freaking adorable. I loved it.

Ren: NO IT'S THE END OF THIS WHOLE ** WORLD!

Jason: I wouldn't go that far Ren...she's thinking of a sequel...don't worry, Ethan won't die.

Ethan: What?

Seth: Are you suggesting something?

Jason: I'M not the serial killer, look at the guy with the crowbar...

Ren: (drools with crowbar clutched in his hands, a manic smile plastered to his handsome, young face) WrItE...mOrE...(growls)

Jason: Back away slowly...make no sudden movements...

Terry: (whimpers)

Ren:SeqUeL...AhH...yes... (evil laugh)

Gaki: He's scaring me, anyways, you have to write a sequel, by the way, where the heck did you go? We're all waiting for you to review, I even have both chapter 21's on hold for you girl SO REVIEW! I love you so much I would stop posting for you to review...(sniff) feel loved...feel very...VERY loved.

Ren: (still drooling and foaming slightly at the corners of his mouth) YeS...lOvEd...AhH...

Gaki: Okay...excuse me a moment, (Steals crowbar from Ren, pushes him down on a bed and ties his limbs down.) THAD!

Thad: Yes?

Gaki: He's all yours. (glances at Ethan) And yours if you want 'im...

Ethan: I think I'll pass...

Thad: OH! MORE FOR ME!

Riley: NOT SO FAST! I want some of that hunk too!

Ren: O.O Ah! Help me! JASON HELP ME!

Jason: I think I'll pass...