So much crying in just one chapter haha.

That was f*ing AMAZING! I love it! I'm going to read it again, then I'm going to read it again, and then I'm going to make everyone I know who's into this read it! I love your no bull-** style, the no-innocents-spared attitude... I coul go on and on... I have never loved slash more than now... and now every other story PALES in comparison to your greatness... definitely the best story I've ever read in this genre... please, if this isn't the end, add more... I don't know if I can stand the wait for an update... *groan*

Pax,Julia

Angsty and tragically honest, and wow, the sex was hot. I love this story, and I hope to see it continue. Rio's mother is pure evil, and hopefully something icky will happen to here (no pun intended).

More, please!

Wow. that was hot. really hot. do write more, please. lovely characters...

i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon

I love it. It like a ** version of Romeo and Juilet or something. Update soon!

This is an interesting story, the characters seem likeable, and there are some funny lines within it. I could not get fully involved in the story, however, because the perspective kept changing. The switch from one character's personal thoughts to the other is very difficult to take in stride, so the story loses whatever intrigue it has by being masked with a mix of confusing thoughts. For a certain section of writing, it needs to be either Alerio or Iki that the reader identifies with, or at the very least there needs to be some transitional phrases. If all their personal emotions are revealed, a certain emotion redundancy occurs. These are just my personal observations, so please don't take them as insults or worse, a personal insult. I'm sure you're a lovely writer, and I do hope you keep writing.

Awee, sweet.. and sexy. O.o; Need more! *patiently awaits next update*

In the 2 hours it took me to read this I've fallen in love with it.

They're so cute... Poor Maria, does it mention how old she is? I can't recall if you did. Poor Alerio.

-_- poor alerio. he must deal with the evil mother lady. *pats him*

I want to kick Alerio's ugly-** mother in the face. She's nearly the exact oposite of my charater Liam's mother--I should remember Alerio's mother when I'm re-writing the chapters. She really makes me sick. Good job at making a truely horrible and hateable (I don't think it's a word, but whatever) character. I wonder why she said that Alerio destroyed her life and made it so miserable? She seems like she's always been miserable. Ah well. Good job guys. I can't wait for the next chapter...

There is more, isn't there? -=Trying to keep ALerio and Iki in pockets=-

Aww... I love Alerio already.

-=Sneaks up from nowhere, puts Iki in one pocket and Alerio in the other=- Why're you looking at me? >.> I didn't do nuffing.