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| amy hobbes 2005-03-04 ch 1,   | great!perfect how u use gems and silver and gold for the image. Keep up the good work! Added story to my Favorite Stories list |
| Ed the Roach 2005-02-24 ch 1, | Oh! I love it! I could just repeat this to myself over and over again! |
| Minus the Bear 2005-02-20 ch 1, | DUDE! That was awsome! Oh, man, that was a wonderful poem, and it was extremely well written. |
| TheItGirl 2005-02-03 ch 1, | why is it that everyone but me can rhyme? >.< oh well. i REALLY liked this one? what twas it inspired by? ~~ |
| PeaceChild 2005-01-24 ch 1, | I like the transition of elements (diamonds/crystal/ruby, etc.) and the message expressed in this poem, lovely note of hope at the end. Good job. ~ PC |
| Cicy Chan 2005-01-13 ch 1, | Really good poem... I loved the rhymes and the short lines. Also very descriptive. |
| Wild Child with a Twist 2005-01-11 ch 1, | HEY!! the rythm in your peom is really good! and you really get your message through. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-01-11 ch 1, | I love the imagry, its like abstract beauty. Much love,Juliet. |
| no-one now 2005-01-11 ch 1, | This is lovely. It flows, the rhymes sound natural and i really like it. x |
| Sunflower dream 2005-01-11 ch 1, | this is very good! i like the mystery to it and the simple phrases. very dreamy |