great!perfect how u use gems and silver and gold for the image. Keep up the good work! Added story to my Favorite Stories list

Oh! I love it! I could just repeat this to myself over and over again!

DUDE! That was awsome! Oh, man, that was a wonderful poem, and it was extremely well written.

why is it that everyone but me can rhyme? >.<

oh well. i REALLY liked this one? what twas it inspired by?

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I like the transition of elements (diamonds/crystal/ruby, etc.) and the message expressed in this poem, lovely note of hope at the end. Good job. ~ PC

Really good poem... I loved the rhymes and the short lines. Also very descriptive.

HEY!! the rythm in your peom is really good! and you really get your message through.

I love the imagry, its like abstract beauty.

Much love,Juliet.

This is lovely. It flows, the rhymes sound natural and i really like it. x

this is very good! i like the mystery to it and the simple phrases. very dreamy