exactly beautiful.

its interesting going back and reading older ones.

"disgusting was the display but deep within my mind someone whispered " Beautiful."" That's amazing. I just love that. This contained so many wonderful images and it was just gorgeously written. Awesome work as always.

Very nice, I loved it!

Wow, my mind wouldn't have whispered that at all! BUT THE POEM IS BEAUTIFUL! Such wonderful imagery in every line! Just wonderful!

O.O This is magnificent (sp?) visuals. Hehe!

Nice job. I love the image this poem creates, and the way you leave the revelation until the end. However, (and I have to say this applies to all your summaries and titles as well) I think you need to really seriously look over your work for grammatical or spelling mistakes; they really do put a reader off. If you don't want to have to go over your work yourself because you think you might be biased (believe me I know the feeling!), you might want to find a friend who can edit your work for you. It really is a shame to see such good conceptions and words hidden in grammatical errors.

There I said it. And thanks for the nice review! It's always good to hear that I'm appreciated.

Oh, I almost forgot! You were writing in your bio that you were sort of semi-atheist, but you weren't sure. I'm the same way, and I found out recently that there's a word for that: it's "agnostic". It's a conglomeration of the Latin roots "a" and "gno", meaning not knowing.

OK now I'm just showing off. I leave you with your new vocabulary word! Keep up the good work, but get an editor!

Weeba

The first thing i did when I was done reading it was nod and smile. You have an interesting and amazing way with words.

So dark, so elusively beautiful. Love it.

What can I say about this poem? It's absolutely beautiful. I wish I could say more, but anybody who reads your poem and perfectly understand the eloquence of the poem and you as a writer. Good job -

Sumi-chan; A whisper in the wind, my love...

Morbidly beautiful. I admire your imagery, this is really well-chosen and well-expressed. Also that tension of finding something sad and actually depressing beautiful at the same time. I know that feeling.

beautiful piece. i love the imagery you use in this. awesome. _

wow, just. wow...

Macabre beauty - you gotta love it. Excellent work! Diction, structure, descriptions... all perfect.

i strive to be an awesome writer like you, once again, please don't stop writing, your diction of words are very powerful.-ArcaneDevices

I really loved it. That was great.