It's so good your creative juices are coming back- from this poem, I take it as a VERY good sign.

hi!! i am so incredibly touched that you dedicated it to me!! *hugs you* and though ive already told you that i really like this song, i shall say it again: I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT!! and the ending just seems so...fitting. yay.

xoxo LlaMa

really really good.

i enjoyed reading this, and it was a welcome return to rating others poems and stories.

hope u stay in contact.

u read mine and i'll read yours.

Speachless. Your choice of words, the metaphors you used..Ugh, I'd kill for your talent! This is going on my Favourites, you're a ** genius! Don't stop writing.

Dude, I deffinitly thought these lyrics rocked hard... I'm not sure what music style you ment it to be, but it for sure comes off (to me) as hardcore/ screamo. I love the like analogies you use. my favorite line is "took lessons in shoving-flowers down my enemy's throat"... so twisted... lol