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| Areneth 2006-03-11 ch 1,   | This is a good poem too! I like the other one better, I think it flows better, this one was choppier. But I still liked it, I don't think I've read a poem quite like this one before. |
| Frankie Lady of soup 2005-10-01 ch 1, | I'm trying to figure out why I never reviewed your poetry before... odd. At any rate, I like this. I'm not a big poetry buff so I can't really comment all that much. Lymerics are my forte... ;) I like it though, very much, and I guess that's all that matters in the end. Go you. |
| Ashley Alquine 2005-06-15 ch 1, | Gorgeous. I love concrete poetry that works. |
| Elusive Enigma 2005-05-02 ch 1, | This is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. The format is just as appealing as the actual text. It is a complete work of art. Keep it up. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
| HideAwayFairy 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Gryphonsd, awesome! I haven't read many poems about them. Very nice I love the descriptions! |
| o0oAnnie 2005-02-20 ch 1, | I really liked this poem...the format and the way it looks is great and it is beautifully written as well...I think my fav line was "Hunted as a symbol of courage"...keep writing! |
| Mlle. Daae 2005-01-29 ch 1, | Very nice, good job!~Mlle. Daae |
| misanthropic muse 2005-01-20 ch 1, | I like the 'diamond' format of this poem and the rhythmic feel. Good job! |