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| Ethereal Kisses 2005-01-12 ch 1,   | You're right your writing sounds a lot like mine (but better... :)...) You know what the really freaky conicidence is? I've just, and I mean JUST, finished a poem which is almost exactly the same as yours! About an insignificant person dying, etc. How very very wierd. You should read it, it's scary how similar it is to yours. It's called No Trouble. Anyway, about your poem, I think it is awesome! I like the way you have personified death, and the silent wings stuff is great. You also used repetition very effectively. Well done, this poem rocks. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-01-11 ch 1, | heartfelt and honest. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| Armas Apple 2005-01-11 ch 1, | Very touching, I find it very wierd how everyone always mention insignificant people, no one is insignificant, so dont let go... Awsome poem, keep it up, ~Armas |
| Rocky G 2005-01-11 ch 1, | Very nice dark poem, I enjoyed reading your work. Rocky |