Wow.. impressive description and imagery. I loved this one a lot.

I thought this was amazing. A touching story with such great details. I really hope you write more. Keep on writting.

I WANT MORE! MORE MORE MORE i like your descriptive words(that were spelled right) very good.

Took my breath away reading this! It showed me another way of writing- great description, real clear imagery - Great stuff!

a pleasure to read, a nice break for me as I'm preparing a presentation on middle geometric pottery in archaic greece :P ... thanks

keltica, the celtic fire from within