I see what your saying! Great writing; powerful! ~!TRW!

Wow...that was...wow. That was completely AWESOME! I love it...seriously, hun, you have a LOT of talent!

ah, the frustrating things in life...

True dat... I can't stand it when people always believe that "God will provide, no matter what". If one is going to be Christian, they need to realize that in order to make something of themselves, they need to get out there and DO it... not just wait around for some Unbelivable deity to hand it to them.

Great poem!!

IDK...I gave up on God more than a year ago. This is still a really good poem, despite my disagreeing with it. I like the formatting, and I love that last stanza.