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Reviews For: Death's Herald

Bloodfeeder 2008-10-25 ch 5,	wow. At first I was getting this whole bad vibe from Alston, and then he goies and does something like that! What are you supposed to say to THAT? Ah well. I'd like to hear maybe a oneshot? or somthing from the boy in the lasts chapters perpective. he kinda sounds like an enigma. but of course, you don't have to, it just sounds really cool. And what exactly does Alston want remy for? At first, I thought it was for like a pleasure slave or something, B/C apparently he didn't want raven to "take him" but now he has a human of his own? Ok, I'll just admit that I'm about as confused as Remy. Lee
SesshoumaruTakahashi 2007-11-23 ch 5,	The ending confused me so far, but I loved it. I hope there will be more, but for now, I will read the other story you have posted...
gerigirl 2007-07-09 ch 5,	yes now this is the kind of story that i like to read. when are more chapters going to be posted up for the continuation of this story i'm in suspense waiting to finish reading this story.
Lucifer's Sonata 2005-03-19 ch 5,	oh my...lol who was that?! please update soon we can find out lol And this is the same Alston who isn't on good terms with our other vamp??hmm interesting..^^ update soon!
Lucifer's Sonata 2005-03-19 ch 4,	ah! i had to review this chapter ^^ the suspence is wonderful! and the hints of comedy rock ^.~ haha but on to the next chapter!!
anonymous 2005-01-28 ch 5,	Please update as soon as you can!! I can't wait to read more!!
Valoria Gilden 2005-01-26 ch 5,	Aw, man, where did the world come to? Vampires are more sympathetic than a simple bartender? It was a good chapter though. We got to know Alston ^^ And I like him, at least for now. I keep wondering where this story is going o.o;; Poor boy...
Valoria Gilden 2005-01-21 ch 4,	And so be it! Cackles Tiny typo at the end. Were should be where. Hah! Alston can't possibly be half as sexy as Raven. I mean, for a dead guy, he's err... well, sexy. And I'm -not- in fact, a necrophile. x_X; I can't wait for the next update, obviously. Bounces and waves flag
Shadows Fury 2005-01-16 ch 3,	Grins and here I thought it couldn't get any better than the first two chapters. Well... I was wrong. The other two chapters were amazing and this one was really good. Remy and Raven's 'relationship' (if you'd call it that) is very distracting. But you won't see me complaining. I'm kind of sad that Raven changed his hair from silver to black. But i'm still sure he's sexy. ...for a vampire that is. Dammit...no more chapters to read. Hm...UPDATE NOW...please.
Valoria Gilden 2005-01-16 ch 3,	Woah. Wow. Want... more. Victoria? Is this Alton's former lover reincarnated or something? Wait, no, sorry. I come to conclusions too quickly. The only fault I can find is a very minor one. You had 'You're' instead of 'Your' on two places. Please... more.
Valoria Gilden 2005-01-14 ch 2,	Oh -life-. This is much too good not to be addictive. In the upbeat bits, it's like my heart is trying to do flip-flops. It's -very- distracting. But very good too. Demands another update
Staris 2005-01-13 ch 2,	amen to that! excelent chapter! please please please update soon!! ^.^
Staris 2005-01-13 ch 1,	I really enjoyed reading that! great start!! please update son kk? ^.^ umm only suggestion is longer chapters i guess lol but i seriously wouldn't change anything other than that!! it was a nice start, please update soon!!
Shadows Fury 2005-01-12 ch 1,	...Grins i'm at a loss for words. I thought this was great. You caught my complete attention from the start and I was disappointed when it was finnished. The chracters are described really well. There was so much detail about Remy's life and I could relate with his past in a way. Ido hope you decide to write more. About suggestions for where you could go with this... it's really up to you. If I do get any ideas i'll be sure to let you know. Anyways, I really, really hope you decide to continue this PRETTY PLEASE... Keep on writing.
Valoria Gilden 2005-01-12 ch 1,	Oh my, very, -very- sexy. Raven turns Remy into a vampire and tries to teach him the game? They start a huge love-hate relationship? I don't care, as long as it's as good as this chapter. So very, very sexy... Coughs For a guy who's alike to a corpse, that is.

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