This is a really good story. I really loved the way you wrote it, i had a hard time telling if it was David or Molech that was the evil one and i thought David was doing that stuff to Tabari, but it turns out to be himself. You did a great job. i loved reading it and it is going into my favorites...like right now:D

OhEmGee THIS IS SO CUTE ANF FUNNY AND IT MAKES ME WANNA SQUEAL
but I'm laughing so hard even that's difficult to do. PLEASE
UPDATE SOON!
MICxVAL AWKWARD LOVE.

This was absolutely amazing! I can't express how much I loved this.
I cried at the end :(. It's rare that a story can evoke emotion out of me, but this one succeeded.
I read it all in one go, along with Confessions of Weakness, and can't wait for the 3rd in the trilogy, if you decide to post it.
Gah, I'm incoherent with amazement, you're my all-time hero for writing this. I can only hope to be half as good as you.
After reading your other stuff, I realize that you have a gift for weaving plots and twists, but even though I expect them, I'm always genuinely surprised (*understatement*).
I hope you continue to write more, and thank you for sharing what you have :).

Awh. That's so sad. You'll never let your couples stay together will you and even though it's sad I can't help but tell you that was ine of the absolute best stories I've read. You schould really considering piblishing your works. :)

Such an odd story. I'm a little confused right now on what's going on though

This story remunds me of Absinthe Desires yet is a lot different. I love your stories.

Why do I like this story? I mean it is awesome to an extreme and I'm pervert because it shouldn't be, buty good job anyway. :)

*giggle* I like it alot already and it's only chapter 2. Go you. I really like his thoughts. They make me smile. :)

hey great stories!! please put more up! this is about the 3rd ive read...i think...plus ode to a goldfish hehe x i think your writing styles great! it really draws the reader in x and the blooper pages are comical x anyway keep posting pwese :)

A'ight, before I bust a nut, I'll add you to my favorite author list. *** Damn, I wish I could write like you. Anyway, I love most of your stories, (that I've read) but they're really long, and I'll get 'round to readin' 'em later. Bye now~!

*lol* okay, so I'm thinking I really read the stories in the wrong order? Because now I understand who the black dragon is at the end of Rease's story. And I understand why the dragon she was riding did his best to steer clear of Tabari.

And may I just say, WOW. The plot twists you disclosed in the last few short chapters of this story had my mind absolutely reeling. To think that he and his teacher never even had the sort of relationship that I as a reader was certain they were having all along... that was just so disconcerting and unexpected but you played it all out so well that it was utterly mind-blowing.The one scene where Tabari shape-shifts into a dragon and escapes, that entire passage had a few spots that were a little confusing, like the thing with breaking and reforming the glass (was he doing that to escape while leaving the chambers intact?) and the whole poisonous cloud thing, where did that manifest from? I loved the poetic justice of how Tabari caused David to commit suicide like that.The poor loveless lad.Why the HELL would he want to go live in Jersey, of all places?? *shudders* He really did go insane didn't he *rotfl*Loved this story. In some ways, it was more intense and poignant than Rease's. (Gawd is that an understatement or what)Keep writing, gal.

These two chapters, 22 & 23, have to be two of the most emotionally charged and powerful chapters you've written thus far... (I know I'm not done reading yet, but hey...)The impact goes beyond words. It's carnal, but its so emotionally grounded that it verges on ethereal.And what's more, the way you've written it makes it real. Your MC is so torn by his inability to reciprocate David's depth of emotions and the solidity of his love, and the way you portray it is at once heart-wrenching and poignant. Beautiful writing. And the sort of profoundness that so many writers are incapable of creating.I loved it!

OMG! You are a fantastic writer, I love the plot twist in the end with the time thing. I really have to stop reading your stuff and actually study though or I'm going fail chem. Keep up the amazing work!

wow .. that was wonderful

AHH!! I WOULD CRY IF I HAD ENOUGH FEELINGS IN ME! GREAT ENDING. I this story, and the ending was just so closure-able...it made me feel complete, even though it wasn't happy. Although you could say that it's happy, in a sense. because Tabari is alive! I wonder what he's doing in Jersey. Anyway, congraduations on your completion of this story! You're such a great writer and I am eager to hear more from you in the future. You did SUCH a great job in your descriptions and..just stuff! Beautiful story.