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| fadedrainbows 2005-01-30 ch 1,   | This is a great topic. It's wonderfully written, however it doesn't seem quite finished. You have a rhythm going, then it just stops. I haven't yet seen this topic before, though, good job with that. ~*~Faded~*~ |